Friday, April 18, 2008
_MİRAY BURCU MEHMET EMRAH_
we will finish our dialogue this day and Mehmet check its grammar mistake ,it is his duty.I sent to your yahoo adress in the evening.I dont want to sent blog but if you want I can sent again to blog I admit Burcu and Mehmet study a lot so thanks for them=)) mine if you see mistake in our dialog you say and we correct it...
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Thanks for your first draft submission.
Unfortunately, your dialogue is full of punctuation mistakes. Please assign someone from the group –or do it all together if you can- to check the capital letters, commas and so forth.
Secondly, the skit can be a bit more playful since you are going to act it in class. Although your skit is well-prepared, it does not seem like it will arise any feelings in the class. You should try to add some more humor in it.
There are not so many mistakes in the dialogue, though I should remind you that ‘afraid’ is an adjective and is always used with ‘be’. It looks like Burcu has made the mistake and Mehmet has not noticed it. (corrected e.g. from the dialogue: I am not afraid of anyhing)
We will talk over the dialogue on Monday . Please try to write a second draft and bring it to class on Monday.
Best,
Mine
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